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Climax

08 Jun

This song does something to me

Whenever I hear it, I get so confused

It’s a SAD song but it makes me HAPPY, excited, sexy

I feel like dancing, flying, smiling, writing, loving, holding his hands

 Touch his lips, face, tongue…

Touch touch touch- touch is what I want. I want to reach, stretch, squeeze, sweat- scream your name through  clenched teeth- until we reach our climax.

 
29 Comments

Posted by on June 8, 2012 in poetry

 

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29 Responses to Climax

  1. dianasschwenk

    June 8, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    HOT AND STEAMY!!!!!!

     
  2. originalapplejunkie

    June 8, 2012 at 8:52 AM

    I like the song..but the video makes me cringe a little..lol..

     
    • shianwrites

      June 8, 2012 at 11:35 PM

      Yeah, the video is a bit a much.

       
  3. Scott Mitchell

    June 8, 2012 at 9:04 AM

    Ahh yeah!!! Good song! I’ll add this to my playlist for special moments :)

     
  4. Tami

    June 8, 2012 at 11:09 AM

    No joke this song does something to a person.

     
  5. stephenedwards425

    June 8, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    This is a brief comment, because I’m going to spend some time with my wife… :)

    Be encouraged!

     
  6. Kira

    June 8, 2012 at 8:06 PM

    Hello,
    I have nominated you for the reader appreciation award I have been given, please check out my blog http://kiramorrescloset.wordpress.com/ for details on how to accept. Thanks for always stopping by my blog. Very much appreciated.
    Have a safe and lovely weekend. God bless
    Love Always,
    Kira Moore

     
    • shianwrites

      June 8, 2012 at 11:47 PM

      Thanks kira! You have a great blog. I really checking it out.

       
      • Kira

        June 9, 2012 at 3:59 AM

        Your welcome! And I love your writing!

        Kira

         
  7. Aina Balagtas

    June 9, 2012 at 12:02 AM

    Shaun, that was sexy and beautiful = )

     
    • shianwrites

      June 9, 2012 at 12:20 AM

      Thanks Aina! That’s exactly how the song sounds to me.

       
      • Aina Balagtas

        June 9, 2012 at 12:22 AM

        Excellent! Coz that’s how it makes us, your readers feel too, so two thumbs up for you 😉

         
      • shianwrites

        June 9, 2012 at 12:27 AM

        You’re the best Anina! :-)

         
      • Aina Balagtas

        June 9, 2012 at 12:33 AM

        Nah 😊 u! Ur the best, I’m just inspired by that beautiful, sensual whom in u 😊

         
  8. Deborah Avila

    June 9, 2012 at 1:58 AM

    Aaahhh ssooo beautiful and true to the soul of your writing ~loved every word! Hugs~Deborah

     
  9. irfriske

    June 10, 2012 at 10:39 AM

    You have introduced me to a song that strikes deep within. I can understand your resonated with it. Though I find the video a bit dark… Love the thoughts your post usually stir. “.” Cat

     
  10. shianwrites

    June 10, 2012 at 6:05 PM

    Yeah, it’s a bit violent. Thanks Cat.

     
  11. Zhen Huang

    June 11, 2012 at 11:04 AM

    Great song! Gives me the goosebumps. Thanks for sharing it.

     
    • shianwrites

      June 12, 2012 at 12:44 AM

      Me too. ;-) Thanks for stopping by Zhen.

       
  12. Radu Ştefan RS

    June 29, 2012 at 3:58 AM

    Usher has always been among my top 5. He is definitely different form other people who rap. This song in particular seems to send a more profound message than the others.

     
  13. Jess J.

    August 8, 2012 at 3:34 PM

    This is my FAVORITE singing-hard-in-the-car-song-EVER! Especially the bridge, I mean I will detour my life to finish singing the song if its on in the car ;-)

     
    • shianwrites

      August 8, 2012 at 9:08 PM

      Yes Jess!!!!! I feel the same whenever I hear it. The bridge is favorite too. *Singing out loud* Where are you now, when I need you around?” Haha!

       
  14. jolynproject

    August 23, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    Oh the power of Usher. lol

     

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